This is what I think

My advertisement is promoting breakfast.

I know my target audience for this product is kids because it has cartoon pictures of The Lorax.

Some of the visual features used in this advertisement include colours and a delicious looking breakfast.

I think this advertisement is good because I know what it is talking about.

                          

This is what I think

My advertisement is promoting  technology .

I know my target audience is adults because adults like technology.

Some of the visual features used in this advertisement include a tablet.

I think this advertisement is good because it is new technology.
 

                   

This Is what I think,

My advertising is promoting drinking sprite.

I know my target audience for this product is adults because it shows a picture of an adult.

Some of the visual features used in this advertisement include blue ice and the persons hair is iced.

I think this advertisement is good because it is cold and it is a fuzzy drink .
                           


                                      

This is What I think

My advertisement is promoting bikes.

I know the target audience for this product is kids because it shows a picture of a kid.

Some of the visual features used in this advertisement include a bike and easy to read the writing.

I think this advertisement is good because it is clear.

                                

Mahys Ads

My advertisement is promoting Kit Kat .

I know the target audience for this product is chocolate lovers because they love chocolate.

Some of the visual features used in this advertisement includes a picture of a Kit Kat.

I think this advertisement is good because the Kit Kat catches people's attention.

                                  

Mahy's Ads

My advertisement is promoting games.

I know the target audience for this product is promoting toy games for kids because they might want to play with them.

Some of the visual features used in this advertisement include colourful pictures,funny toy games and pictures of the games.

I think this advertisement is good because there are lots of games that you can pick.

                          

Mahys Ads

My advertisement is promoting coke.

I know the target audience for this product is fizz lovers because coke can fizz.

Some of the visual features used in this advertisement include a picture of coke.

I think this ad is good because the polabear is catching the coke.

                  

Mahys ads

My advertisement is promoting coca cola.

I know the target audience for this product is hot people who drink coke because the polar bear is holding the cold coke.

Some of the visual features used in this advertisement include a big white polar bear and colour .

I think this advertisement is good because the polar bear is big so it catches your mind.

Mahy's ads

My advertisement is promoting colourful skittles.I know the target audience for this product is adults and for children because we can eat them.Some of the visual features used in this advertisement include fruit and candy.I think this advertisement is effective because it's a good ad and it catches people's attentions.

Esthers Hoiday

In the holidays I went to my Nan's house to meet her for the first time in my life. I spent lots of time with my nan .

I enjoyed  my holiday because at home we have a smart TV and we watched Inside Out, Max, Minions and  Rascal Mania.

What I didn't like was getting growled by my parents 😁 ouch man  did that hurt my feelings.

Next holiday I would like to go to visit my older sister in Perth in Australia because I love her💖

By Esther 

Lepa Holiday

In the holidays me and mum and my little brother went to the snow mountain.I enjoyed sking down the mountain because when I first tried it I had butterflies in my tummy but when I tried it again they went away and so I got used to it .I didn't enjoyed going up the hill and down the hill because it was very hard to get up and I got tired.The next holidays I would like to go to the mall or go to the movies.

By Lepa 

Bens Holiday

In the holiday I went to the pools.        

I enjoyed it because it was out side .

I didn't enjoy it because the fast slid. 

Next holiday I would like To go camp because it fun.       

By Ben      

My Fun Holidays

In the holidays I did Eid and it was fun. I enjoyed it because I got to go to heaps of my family's homes and to get money. I enjoyed every single thing from my holiday. Next holiday I would like to go to Rain Bows End because it's fun!

By Hamza

My Winter Holidays

In the holidays I went shopping and helped my mum and sis to do house work. I enjoyed helping my mum and sis because I learnt new works we do at home. I didn't enjoyed it when my mum and dad went to work and me and my sister were at home relaxing.

Next holidays I would like to go on a family picnic.

By Shruti

In my school holidays

In the holidays I went to The Warehouse with my family. My mum and I bought lots of clothes for the winter.

I enjoyed The Warehouse because there were lots of things to pick. I picked important things.

I didn't enjoy it because my parents wasted so much money that they couldn't buy anything.

Next holiday I would like to go nowhere because I what to sleep over the holidays.

By Angel

My Holidays

In the holidays I went to the movies and I saw Ant Man. It was very good. I enjoyed the movie because it was funny and fun. I didn't enjoy the popcorn because it tasted like dirt.

Next holidays I would like to go to the pools because it might be hot.

By Ezekiel

My Holidays

In my holidays I went to the movies and watched Inside Out and Terminator. It was cool as. I enjoyed Terminator because this was my first time watching Terminator. It was so cool.

Next holiday I would like to go to the movies because it is so, so cool.  It is dark inside the movies and I enjoy that.

By John

My Winter Holiday

In the holidays I went shopping with my dad, mum and two sisters. I enjoyed buying lots of pretty clothes because I love wearing them to big birthdays. I didn't enjoy going to my uncle's house because his house is very dirty and dusty.

Next holidays I would like to go to Wellington to meet my grandpa at his house.  He gives me lots of yummy chocolates to eat and he makes a lot of delicious food for me and my family.

By Awantika.

My Great Holiday

In the holidays I had fun because my family came and we went to do ice skating and we went to the market on Saturday.

I enjoyed it because I've never been ice skating. I was the one to show them around because they have never been to the market before.

I didn't enjoy it because they went back to Christchurch and I will never see them again. I might not go ice skating again but I will go to the market.

The next holidays I want to go to Australia to go see my dads family and I'm sure it will be very fun.

By Manukura

Holidays in Winter

In the holidays I had a sleep over at my aunt’s house. When it was night time we had pizza for dinner for dinner. When we were in bed we ate a little bit of ice cream. In the morning I was drawing pictures of different things.

I enjoyed eating pizza for dinner because then I also enjoyed sleeping in the bed because it was more comfy than mine.

I didn’t enjoy eating ice cream because that is a little bit unhealthy. Eating two unhealthy things is bad for you and can make you sick.

Next holidays I would like to go to a trip to a place with animals in it. Because I love wildlife and they are living things.

By Sawanpreet

In the holidays I woke up at night and stole some food to eat because I was hungry. I went to my room and ate it all up then went back to sleep. After that I had breakfast and then I dressed up for church. It was fun meeting new people that I do not know. I also went to the shops and I went to Burger King. The food was delicious.  

I enjoyed going to church because I met new people and I had new friends there. I felt happy going church and I was really proud of myself. But when I got home I got really bored I decided to read my book. I also liked going to the shops and going to Burger King.

I didn’t enjoy it at home because I didn’t like staying at home and it was really boring.

Next holidays I would like to go to the movies because there are fun movies to watch.       

By Vika

It's the Winter Holidays Again

In the holidays I went to a camp called KINGS KIDS. It started on the Monday the 6th to Thursday the 16^th. It was a 2 week camp. We learnt 5 songs and did  one drama which we performed.

I enjoyed the camp because we did this thing called an Out Reach. We went out to Queen Street, two times and then we went to Mangre Town Center to perform out drama. Then we went to a church called Worship Center.

I didn’t enjoy the part where we had to do the drama in front of strangers. I hardly got to see my family because only I went to Kings Kids.

Next holidays I would like to spend time with my family, and go somewhere everyday.

There will be another Kings Kids next year.

Crystalive 

In the holidays I went to a school holiday program it was at Pact. At Pact I went to the movies. At the movies I watched Inside Out it was an emotions movie. I also went roller skating at Skate Land in was really fun. Later that week I went to Paraki Spring Pools. The last week of the holidays I went up north with my brothers it was so boring.

I enjoined Pact because we went on trips everyday and there were a lot of fun games to play like video games, Pool, Ping Pong and green machines.

I didn’t enjoy going up north because it was boring and there was nothing to doL.

Next holidays I would like to go to Pact because we went on a lot of trips I never got bored and also there where a lot of games there I could play withJ.

By Jenny-Leigh

Yes, you guessed it!

In the Holiday I went overseas to watch the All Blacks and the Samoan game in the hot, hot weather.

I enjoyed watching the game because it was nice to cheer for your own country and see my relatives there so happy. I didn't enjoy the loud cheering because it was really hurting my ears and it was so loud it nearly made me faint.

The next holidays I would like to go to visit my cousins in Australia and spend time with my lovely Grandma and hopefully see my Grandpa.

Sharon

In the holidays I went to the movies and I watched a movie called Jurassic World. It was about dinosaurs and we watched it at the Hoyts Cinemas. I enjoyed watching Jurassic World because I liked the scene when the water dinosaur came and ate the other dinosaur. I didn't enjoy one part of the movie because the poor brontosaurus were killed and were siting a in the meadow dying.

Next holidays I would like to go to Sky Tower because it has really good view of the city. I have never been to Sky Tower so I am really excited.

By Shubhreet

In my holidays I stayed home and watched T.V and did activities. Some of the activities we did were drawing and colouring. We were playing with the play dough and making stuff. We played Connect 4 and Snakes and Ladders. We tried to go outside but it was too windy so we went and watched a movie.

I enjoyed the movies at Auckland City where Time Zone is. We watched Ant Man and it was a little bit funny. My most favourite bit was when a girl showed Ant Man how to punch. The Mexican guy was so

Funny as well. The most interesting part was the bit when the Mexican man grabbed a man because the whole place was going to blow up.

I didn't enjoy staying home because it was so boring and we didn't want to do the same things that we did yesterday. We didn't what to do drawing or activities so we watched another movie.

In the last week I was sick but by the end of Friday I was a little bit better.

Next holidays I want my parents to stay home and not go to work because my mum and dad were working both weeks. I hope my parents will get a week off from work. It would be a good week with my family and so I can spend time with them.

By Tyra

More Winter School Holidays

In the holidays I saw Inside Out, Minions, and Bargerangy Bhajann. I enjoyed seeing Bargerangy Bhajann because it was about a small Pakistan girl. She got lost and went to India. An Indian man saved her life and he got into lot of trouble for that girl.

I didn't enjoy it when the man got shot because he worked to save a Pakistan girl to get to her mum.

Next holidays l would like to go to Soccer Camp. I will be able to learn new skills from other teams.

By Krishi

In the holidays I went to the movies on my birthday to watch Jurassic World and had a cupcake for my breakfast. I also had bacon and eggs on toast. I went to my aunties for a week and also went to church.

I enjoyed my Aunty because she does fun stuff and has a great house that has a PS4, PS3 and XBOX 360 as well XBOX 1.

I didn't enjoy it because it was kind of boring when I had to go to my own house. I didn’t like it because we didn’t do much.

Next holidays I would like to go to my Aunts again and stay for the whole holidays because she is fun to be with.

By Maqushio

In the holidays me and my family planned to go to the movies. We were thinking of going to Manukau Mall before we went to the movies. We did a little shopping and I bought a Xbox game, Halo. Then we went to the movies. We decided to watch Jurassic World. I enjoyed it because it was realistic and we watched it with 3d glasses.  I loved the ending. I didn't enjoy shopping because it took a little bit longer than I liked.

Next holidays I would like to go to Rain Bows End because I want to go on the roller coaster and win some prizes.

By Shaheel

Winter School Holidays

In the holidays I celebrated Eid. We went to people's houses and there were lots of sweets and food. Me and my family did a lot of shopping.

I enjoyed celebrating Eid because I went to my friend’s house and we played Fifa. I didn't enjoy shopping because I did not get the clothes I wanted.

Next holidays I would like to go to Rain Bows End because it has fun rides.

By Avish

In the holidays I had a sleepover with my cousin for 4 days. Then I had a sleepover with my friend Ashley for 1 day. I enjoyed the sleepover because we played hide and seek with Ashley and I was teaching her to play Mine Craft. I didn't enjoy it when I jammed my fingers in the door 3 times because it hurt so badly.

Next holidays I would like to go to Sky Tower because I have only been there once and it's been like forever.

By Hayley

In the holidays I went to the movies to watch Jurassic Park. It was scary but cool too. I also went there with my older sis and little sis. It was loads of fun.

I enjoyed going to roller skating with my friends at my holiday program because we got free food. In addition I also played with my little sister and we were playing with our water guns.

I didn't enjoy being sick over the holidays because my little sister had it and she gave it to me. Then I gave it to my older sister. It was a real pain but I still got some free chocolate.

Next holidays I would like to go Rainbows End because I have been good. Maybe a trip to Samoa as well because the beaches are so beautiful.

By Kahlan